tell me why you cried lyricsVery Easy Points. Rate my lyrics and tell me why?

I am a 15 year old male. I am not a very accomplished songwriter as this is the 4th song I've ever written. My first 3 were on the lighter side, and are on my page as questions. I thought that I'd try something a little more metal this time. So please take that into consideration before giving any comments. Please give me a score of 1-10 and a short explanation as to why you gave the score you did and thanks. So I present to you, Three Steps to Hell

Three Steps to Hell

Verse 1
You got nowhere to go, it's finally time
I see the look on your face, you don't want to face it
But today is the day, like it or not
You can't run away, it's your day to fight
So stand up like a man, don't back down this time
Blood will be shed, cries will be heard
But ttell me why you cried lyricshis is what you get, you made your bed
Are you gonna lay down or fight?

Chorus
My ultimate dream, my final wish
To see you suffer, to feel my pain
When this is over, I'll have a smile on my face
After seeing the scars on yours
I don't care if you scream and yell,
You're going down...down the three steps to hell

Verse 2
You got what you wanted, and you wanted a fight
But now you've got noone who wants to defend
When I get my hands on you
You'll be lucky if you walk out with a beating heart
All my anger that you've caused
Will finally be let out, and it'll feel great
Go ahead, find somewhere to hide
Because if I find you, you won't stay alive

Chorus
My ultimate dream, my final wish
To see you suffer, to feel my pain
When thitell me why you cried lyricss is over, I'll have a smile on my face
After seeing the scars on yours
I don't care if you scream and yell,
You're walking going...down the three steps to hell

*Guitar Solo*

Chorus Variant
My ultimate dream, my final wish
To see you suffer, to feel my pain
When this is over, I'll have a smile on my face
After seeing the scars on yours
And when we're dead, I'll meet you again
But this time I'll have the devil on my side
When you go down...down the three steps to hell!
9/10 Reminds me a lot of Children Of Bodom for some reason. Why? Sounds awesome and again, reminds me of COB. :P nice job man!

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